I can't think of how long it took to write something like the intro chapter in the story, but this was my first escape from fanfiction. One of the chapters yet to be released (chapter 6) was made in two days. You read it all?
Anyways, the anime girl I sorta wanna see is the evil woman/Roxy from the same story... you should have all the details you need. A dagger held in a killing position would help too (not the knife pose with Richtofen, but a killing pose.)