Talk:Chloe Carmichael/@comment-25156351-20160713040931

I'm not trying to be mean but...

Chloe needs improvement, her backstory also needs to be expanded more, that could make her a very interesting character.

Her flaws don't seem to be enough, maybe give more flaws to Chloe? like, making her secretly  very insecure of herself due to her very extreme emotions or secretly depressed due to the death of someone important in her life?

Maybe giving Chloe more enemies? besides Foop, The Fair Bears and Dark Laser, like, a rival in school?

or maybe adding a tragic event in her backstory? like the death of any of her family members (grandfather, grandmother, cousin, etc.) or a very important person for her?

Before you reply, again, I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just suggesting a few things to add to Chloe, I'm not saying she's a Mary Sue either, in fact, she is a nice character with lots of potential for me, she just needs small improvements, that's all.